The God's Judgement

1.The poor people are starving and then Bishop burns them in a fire.
2.They turn to Bishop Hatto for food because he had lot's food from last years stock.
3.He burns the people because all they do is eat corn and then they will quickly run out of food supplies."Of Rats that only consume the corn."
4.It means that he either died or or literally never slept again.
5.They are annoyed for burning the people and storing the corn away from them, they also might be hungry.
6.Because he had heard how much rats there were and wanted to get to a safe place.
7.I think it means that the rats were angry and hungry , considering that the phrase "His eyes are burning every time he looks at me" exists.
8.He wanted to include the fact that there were so much of them that even the cat was afraid.
9.I think it suggests that god sent the tonnes of rats to kill Bishop because of his selfishness and that's why the story is called God's Judgement.
10.The man Bishop Hatto is a selfish man.I say that because instead of sharing his food with the poor people he burned them. "I'faith 'tis an excellent bonfire!"
11. The mood gets more scarier at the last 3 stanzas because it describes how Bishop is eaten. And the pace races to finish the story.The pace is tied to the description.
13.The Rats, because usually the rats aren't that smart to reach or eat Bishop.
14.I liked the story because it is a metaphor story. My favorite part of the story was at the start of the story when the corn is said to be rotten since it's the main reason why Bishop burned all the poor people.The summer and autumn had been so wet.That in winter the corn was growing yet, "'Twas a piteous sight to see al ground the grain lie rotting on the ground." That tells me that the corn was rotting.

Poem Story

Cast off then his corselet of iron,helmet from head; to his henchman gave,choicest of weapons,he well-chased sword,bidding him guard the gear of battle.
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He took of his armor and gave it to henchman,he took the sharpest sword from his guard.


The part I'm suppose to learn.
Sai says stuff before me
laden with slaughter his lair to seek

Then at the dawning, as day was breaking, 

the might of Grendel to men was known; 

then after wassail was wail uplifted, 

loud moan in the morn. The mighty chief, 

atheling excellent, unblithe sat, 

labored in woe for the loss of his thanes, 

when once had been traced the trail of the fiend, 

spirit accurst: too cruel that sorrow, 

too long, too loathsome. Not late the respite; 

with night returning, anew began 

ruthless murder; he recked no whit, 

firm in his guilt, of the feud and crime.

In Modern English this means
When the sun was setting the men that came to fight were afraid of Grendel. Then they heard Grendels roar.

Le 3 paragraphs on the man ad thing

In this advertisement you can see some contrast. You can see a man in the advert in a local background holding an electric device which is global.The advert is mainly about

It's a ...

Wwf
Emotional and Rational because it's a real fact and because if all forests die we wouldn't live.

Michelin
Rational and Emotional because there is a baby and everyone loves babies and rational because it has a reason.

Dove
Rational because it has a lot of reasons

Speed limit
Emotional because it talks about life and death of how quick we go.

Coca Cola
Compare because they are comparing you to athletes and because if Michelle drinks it so should you

My advertisement

My Advertisement

Mobile Phone
Printer
Shoes
PlayStation
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Backpack
Double sided torch
Chocolate
Jam

Rationality
Compare/Contrast
Emotion
Transference
Combination of above

Convince Me

MacDonalds ad
https://youtu.be/PmrTDZy3f2M

It's a combination of rationality and do the right thing.
It uses two celebrities . If they eat it so should you type of thing.
What makes it powerful is that there is two happy celebrities.

Story Stuff

Genre:fantasy , action.

Main character with full character traits: 
Name:Blue Topaz
Characteristics:cheerful, hot headed, persevering.


story line (plot 101)
Blue Arrives to Earth 
She meets The Crystal Gems
Blue tells them about the Homeworld Gems.
They go to homeworld (in space)
They find rose
Cluster Activates 
Crystal gems win.


moment in your narrative

• what are the conflicts?man vs man, man vs technology 
• which other characters?Garnet,Pearl,Amethyst,Steven,Rose Quartz, Peridot, Jasper and Lapiz Lazli.
• how does your character grow, or confirm a characteristic?Just before she came to earth , she tried fighting Jasper , she lost and threw herself of a cliff (hot headed). (She is not dead)

Model text

• to be approved by me if not one of our texts this year
• example piece(s) posted
• description, the way the author writes it
• dialogue, the way the author writes it

Canterbury Tales Work

Track the storyline for any two of our stories

Pardoners Tale
The Knight's Tale

Pardoner's Tale:
Characters: Death, The old man (catalyst), Jocasta, Archetypes(Tom,Dick and Harry),Giovanni,Amelia,Michelangelo.
Setting: Forest,Village.
Disruption:When Ambrousius Dies.
Conflicts: The men wanted to kill each other for the money.(Man vs Man)
Tom wanted to take all the gold. Dick and Harry get killed by Tom's poison.When Dick and Harry stab Tom. They find the gold.
Climax:When they all kill each other.
Outcomes:The Death won, it killed all the Alchemists.

The Kinights Tale:
Characters: The Knight,Amelia,Theseus,Emily,Palamon,Arcite,Diana,Venus,Mars.
Setting:Prison, Village,Garden.
Conflicts:Arcite and Palamon wanted to duel for Emily.
Disruption: When they see Emily(the Catalyst)
Climax:When Palamon and Arcite are jousting for Emily.

Outcomes:Emily married the man who truly loved her.

Tom:
Sneaky, He wanted the gold so much that he decided to poison his two friends. Unlucky: He picked out the shortest dagger so he had to go get the food.
Tom is a flat character.
Palamon:
Brave:He jousted for Emily.
Cheater: He asked Venus to make sure that he was in love with Emily.
Palamon is a flat character.

The Knights Tale:
"My reputation speaks for itself. Iv'e fought in the King's service all over the world  - Alexandria

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The Knights Tale:
A chivalric romance tale needs to involve courtly love and chivalric Knights. The Knights tale is a good chivalric romance. .Palamon and Arcite fall in love with Emily. It is love at first sight. There is a joust at the end.This means that the story is a Chivalric romance because there are two chivalric knights who fight for the  affection of Emily. Palamon and Arcite are chivalric IKnights because if they were not, they would beat each other for their love for Emily and they would tell on each other that one of them escaped. The most chivalric knights loses the battle but wins the affection of Emily. Arcite wanted to beat Palamon to Emily while Palamon just wanted Emily therefore he is the most chivalric knight.There is love, there's a joust which decides on the fate of Emily and the two Knight. In conclusion, this story is a chivalric romance because it contains a romance and chivalric Knights.


Pardoners Tale:
This tale is a morality tale, It always needs to involve a moral at the end. This tale is an amazing example of a morality tale, because it includes one at the end and the whole story adds more 'morality' to it.The tale is about 3 main characters called Dick Tom and Harry.They go on a quest to find Death to avenge Ambrosius. After they all found Death they died. This leaves a moral to the story that if you go looking for death , don't be surprised to find him. After Ambrousius died Tom,Dick and Harry wanted to kill death so they went of to find him. On their way they found and old man that said they will find Death near the oak tree. But instead of finding Death there they found three bags of gold. After that they decided to kill each other to get more gold. Tom decided to poison the other two. And Dick and Harry decided to stab Tom.In conclusion Death found them that is the moral of the tale.

The Nun's priest tale:
The Nun's Priest tale is a fable. The tale has talking animals ,that makes it a fable.This is a great example for a fable because it simply includes talking animals.In the tale there is two main characters Chaunticleer and Sir Russel Fox.Sir Russel Fox asked Chaunticleer to sing, foolishing him. Then Fox grabbed his neck and ran away. While on the run Fox said " Go away , you stupid yolkes ( making a rude gesture) I've got the cock now ! And I'm going to eat him up!" Sir Russel Fox and Chaunticleer are archetypes because they are both cheeky naive. There is a moral to the story , That you shouldn't be so gullible. (Have trust problems). In the end I think that it is a fable because it includes talking animals.

The Wife of Bath's Tale:
This tale is a folk tale. A folk tale always has a believable story, It is also set in the real world. This is a good folk tale because it is in the real world and has a bit of magic in it at the end. The tale is about A knight Sir Codsbrain who flirts with a girl then the queen threatens him for death. Sir Codsbrain found a woman called Alison in the forest and started flirting with her. The girl called for help because she pretty much hated him. Then the queen wanted him dead. Obviously he begged for his life but he needed to answer a question in return.In conclusion this story has to be a folk tale because it is set in a normal place and has a bit of magic.

Characters

Protagonist/Hero
The 'main' character that is usually a hero and sometimes saves someone.Like Steven from StevenUniverseJust go watch 

Antagonistic
A character that is hard to get along with.Like Gargamel from Smurfs

Archetype
A character that is perfect. For example when the fairy god mother gave Cinderella her dress for the ball she looked perfect.

Flat character
 Flat characters are usually two-dimensional in that they are relatively uncomplicated.
Someone like

Round character
The complete opposite of the flat character , Someone like Fialka from the incredibles. A round character is usually behaving and speaking in a "real life" manner.

Foil character
Is someone that is close to the main character but they make their own desicions and choices. Eg.- Gretl, Fritz, Karl.